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august sixteenth

by Ava Blu

my clothes look different hanging in the new closet,

a certain sadness is there
with the colors blending to form shades of
black and blue;

i leave the door open as i sleep
so that i can imagine waking up to
new colors in the morning.

08/16/2009

Posted on 08/17/2009
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/17/09 at 04:39 AM

This is my favorite one of the series so far. It's a beautiful thought, and you hit it well the windows are afraid to shake. The last three lines are as perfect as anything I could ever hope to read.

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