I've been keeping up with this whole series of poems--and you have yet to disappoint with any of them. All short and sweet, like the summer days that bred them. Keep it up, and I'll keep reading :-)

I like the energy of this, that energy suggesting the image of a phone conversation and something you've said after the other person has already hung up. It's a striking image and it lends itself well to the sharp (no pun intended) imagery of this. This is simple, direct writing, and I love it.