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Non Entières

by Caitlin Schwartz

Sitting, resting
Unaware
The darkness comes,
Proliferates
and seeps into my skin
Elasticity:
stretches over my face
until I cannot
see.
Ebony and Midnight
cloud my senses
until I forget
my name.
Hurried streaks
Remain etched into
my soul.

The darkness begins
its retreat.


But I am left
Unwhole

02/09/2015

Author's Note: An ekphrastic poem inspired by Pierre Soulages’ “Peinture”

Posted on 02/10/2015
Copyright © 2025 Caitlin Schwartz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/11/15 at 04:58 PM

I did not know Pierre Soulages and his works. Your poem comes alive after reading about his career and viewing some of his works. "Ebony and Midnight cloud my senses until I forget my name." - these lines seem to exude his essence. Thank you.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/13/15 at 04:18 PM

albeit I am told to beware entry, nevertheless I dare make entrance and upon entering find, an ode, of priceless crafting and entrancing.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/15/15 at 10:31 PM

This poem speaks to me of sleep and dreams and of unfilled visions or desires. A consistent message throuhout the poem.

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