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Winter Dogs by Terry OlynikThey come in a line
Across the horizon
Their canine breath
In a frozen snarl.
I lay back in the snow
As they grow close
Barking spittle flying
My bulging blood veins
Eager to be severed.
They have come
At my calling
At last.
06/17/2014 Posted on 06/17/2014 Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/19/14 at 12:56 AM Excellent poem, Terry. Pretty dramatic stuff...one of my worst nightmares, vividly brought to life, made all the more interesting/compelling in how you welcome the death. |
| Posted by Rob Littler on 06/20/14 at 12:26 AM Maybe my own cognative pain won't let me see an eagerness to be severed so much as wanting death as the knowledge of what wanting death means, the wisdom to have wanted it, or at least the respect for the choice....anyway the effect in the poem deepens my peace at the dogs at the end, hell hounds though they may be... |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 06/24/14 at 10:32 PM I think someone should buy you a beer, Terry. But I know the feeling even if I shudder at the image. |
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