| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/16/14 at 08:18 PM Very effective analogy. Great imagery. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/16/14 at 09:56 PM Story of my life George and you told it succinctly and well. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/17/14 at 02:21 PM your poem, George, reinforces my belief that in the face of genuine love all opposition wilts and is transformed into light and ally. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/17/14 at 03:34 PM This reinforces the transformative power of love. I really like how you used the forge in this. Uplifting - solid piece, George. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/23/14 at 08:17 PM Powerful statement of love, made all the stronger with the right alloys of inspiration and imagery. I especially like that third stanza. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 02/28/14 at 11:08 AM An illustration of the power that concrete (or in this case, metal) images wield in bringing abstraction to life. 'Touching' poetics George... |
| Posted by Angela Stevens on 03/27/14 at 09:18 PM Love the imagery. Love can transform. |
