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Agony

by Caitlin Schwartz

Agony.
Pure, unadulterated
agony.

Pain
So intense,
Her thoughts can focus on nothing else.

Blood trickles
Down,
Thick and red.

All she wanted
Was a new pair of shoes.

09/24/2013

Posted on 09/25/2013
Copyright © 2025 Caitlin Schwartz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rob Littler on 09/26/13 at 05:20 AM

Yet, it contains the truth of sacrifice you must give to your art. The 'brutality' is in the eye of the beholder. YO!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/26/13 at 01:11 PM

this lovely ode like all artistic expression stands perfectly independent of a need to explain its intention. each reader will glean what they will from this, whatever that is, which ultimately is an image formed separate from intent. which is as it should be.

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