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Snow muffled heartbreak (Haiku/Senryu)

by Dorian Black

Heartbeat whispers tick
while vacating vacancies.
Winter fallout looms.

11/22/2011

Posted on 11/22/2011
Copyright © 2025 Dorian Black

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/22/11 at 09:18 PM

Nice read but I have to admit my favorite part is actually the title. Something about "Snow Muffled," it's unique and a playful contrast to the poem itself.

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 11/23/11 at 05:36 AM

I also love the title but the poem just as much.

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