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Coffee shop staccato
by Dorian BlackRandomly indulgent,
wings of smoke feather
through the air.
Whispers spoken beyond
starving artist's ears.
Platitude becomes so very clear. 11/21/2011 Posted on 11/21/2011
Copyright © 2025 Dorian Black
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/21/11 at 10:00 PM I got interesting visuals with this one :) |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/25/11 at 05:43 PM ... outstanding... welcome to Pathetic.... |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/15/12 at 04:30 PM I like the wings of smoke feathering about, also the choice of the word "starving". That last line fills in the details nicely. |
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