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by Genevieve Sturrock

i miss you

the you who I once knew

the you who used to know me

the you who made me...me

the me who used to know you

the me who you once knew

i miss me

11/09/2011

Posted on 11/10/2011
Copyright © 2025 Genevieve Sturrock

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 11/10/11 at 01:30 PM

Missing is the hardest part isn't it! So we have to acknowledge it!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/10/11 at 09:57 PM

I really loved the way you ran these lines together. It was a lovely read.

Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 11/11/11 at 02:55 AM

Brilliant.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/23/12 at 03:16 AM

Heh...clever use of 'me' and 'you,' excellent in fact, Gen. Adds to favourites.

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