Dreams are good at letting you down unfortunately, which is probably the reason I stopped having them. A fear of commitment is usually do to doubt, or of a fear of inadequacy itself; I suppose it's better to find out about it sooner rather than later - that's what I tell myself anyway. Anyway, great piece; the frustration and unhappiness are well conveyed (assuming I didn't make them up on my own); very nicely done.

I think you meant "I should have KNOWN I would be the undoing of you" instead of just know. Anyway I actually love the line and the rest of the poem is great. Very vivid and nice parallelisms too. Well done and thanks for sharing. Though my dreams often seem the meaningless kind (at least what I remember), literature about them is always interesting.