| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 03/08/10 at 06:15 AM I miss winter already... But it's still pretty cool here and it's suppose to rain for the next week, so at least I have that. I haven't seen a crow in a long time. We have the occasional raven here, but no crows that I've seen. Too bad too - I've always like them. Anyway, I'm not very fond of warmer months, but I do like the image you've pasted here. A canopy full of crows is wonderful (for a while anyway); very nicely done. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/08/10 at 06:34 PM I think it's going around- "spring fever". Thanks for this upbeat write. Alot of imagery. Farewll winter blahs (I hope). |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/08/10 at 07:32 PM You nailed the crows Cris. Well done....CharMin |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/09/10 at 02:10 AM Welcome alliterations, making me smile at the caw-caphony, and ready for spring! Thank you. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/10/10 at 01:12 AM Nice to read my first spring poem on this site and glad it was from you. You do the seasons so well. Smiling at the caw-cophony :-) Today we took a ride further south on what seemed like the first spring day staying in the low seventies. The robins and cardinals are back and the crocus. I feel like you are getting us started. Thanks. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 03/11/10 at 07:42 PM A great #1 poem today, reminding us Spring is just around the corner. Succinct and powerful. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/14/10 at 05:15 AM Oh do I await spring, Chris..and if it takes the cawing of crows to be its harbinger, bring them on! Great metaphor |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 03/14/10 at 07:59 PM in such a succinct array of images and sounds and words, I am thrilled this peaks at the top of the top-rated list...poetry at it's most natural...peace, jewels |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/18/10 at 01:10 AM Chris, you caught me in your splendid alliteration delight ;) |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 03/19/10 at 10:58 PM I could hear them while I read, great choice of words! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/04/10 at 09:18 PM i don't know how i missed this one! even though spring doesn't mean quite as much to me as it used to, living in the desert now, i appreciate the feeling, miss the feeling of waking up from winter. |
