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Perhaps I am Sailing

by Kim Thevenot

perhaps i am just sailing

on a breeze

hinted with the scent

of gypsy rose.



perhaps i am painting

an insolent masterpiece for you:

reds in all the wrong places

and smeared with misconceptions.



i have noticed that the gentleman is, still that.

giving me the cold cordial shoulder.



he looks at the blame,

sees it with a crimson tint

of the illusion of my shed blood.



but perhaps i am just sauntering

through patches of yellow sunny rainfall:

feeling slightly cleansed and refreshed,

but drenched to the bone

with his awful impressions

and weighed down by his obvious distaste.



Yet, perhaps i am only sailing

above

on a gypsy rose breeze.

01/25/2006

Posted on 03/07/2010
Copyright © 2025 Kim Thevenot

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jo Halliday on 03/12/10 at 06:38 AM

No words to describe this; stunning and quickening the latent monologues: the almost-repetition of the first stanza brings out well the thought that started out, that returned, having gathered not much more wisdom but still some more knowledge.

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