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Perhaps I am Sailing by Kim Thevenotperhaps i am just sailing
on a breeze
hinted with the scent
of gypsy rose.
perhaps i am painting
an insolent masterpiece for you:
reds in all the wrong places
and smeared with misconceptions.
i have noticed that the gentleman is, still that.
giving me the cold cordial shoulder.
he looks at the blame,
sees it with a crimson tint
of the illusion of my shed blood.
but perhaps i am just sauntering
through patches of yellow sunny rainfall:
feeling slightly cleansed and refreshed,
but drenched to the bone
with his awful impressions
and weighed down by his obvious distaste.
Yet, perhaps i am only sailing
above
on a gypsy rose breeze. 01/25/2006 Posted on 03/07/2010 Copyright © 2025 Kim Thevenot
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jo Halliday on 03/12/10 at 06:38 AM No words to describe this; stunning and quickening the latent monologues: the almost-repetition of the first stanza brings out well the thought that started out, that returned, having gathered not much more wisdom but still some more knowledge. |
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