I am thoroughly forgotten and perpetually wanting
Yet i still know how to make you emit sweet sounds
And so under this blood red sunset
I can hear your silence across the miles of this valley
...and i coyly hold my tongue.
So, you think this poem is too good for a title then? Well, if that's the case then I wholeheartedly agree. It's only five lines, but those five are some really great lines, especially the forth - "I can hear your silence...". Very nicely done!
