| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 09/30/09 at 02:39 AM I quite agree with El and this stirs the mind as well. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/30/09 at 10:28 PM
I weep/giggle/am nudged by the very brim-of-life in accurate understanding. Powerful delivery, this.
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/01/09 at 01:07 AM This hits hard and leaves behind not only the sad impression but what is to come, a hope in this reader of a different kind of dad in you. Thank you. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 10/02/09 at 10:59 PM Wow, you packed a whole lot of story into 3 brief lines. Nice work. |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 10/20/09 at 05:02 AM well said. |
| Posted by Rowan Luis on 12/29/09 at 12:23 AM ah this scene made me smile |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/11/10 at 10:52 PM love this :) |
| Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 03/17/10 at 10:44 PM I didn't expect the ending, and once it hit I wanted to cry. This is beautiful and something any parent can relate to. |
| Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 03/17/10 at 10:44 PM I didn't expect the ending, and once it hit I wanted to cry. This is beautiful and something any parent can relate to. |
| Posted by Doreen Cavazza on 05/03/11 at 11:19 PM You have a gift for packing a bunch of meaning and emotion into a itty bitty space. This is glorious. |
