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Three Rivers

by Terry Olynik

Remembering our weekend in Pittsburgh
Thirty years ago this month.
You feckless, bra-less.
Me beguiled. Breathless.
Eating oysters in Station Square.
Noisy, magnetic and crazed.
Dancing in questionable clubs,
Embarrassing flummoxed cabbies.
I still have our room service bill:
One bottle of Chateau Bla-Bla
Red wine -$90
Two orders french fries - $9
Tipping the server fifty-one dollars
We could have so used the next day.

I hear the old steel town
Has changed a lot since then.
I hear you have too.

09/25/2009

Posted on 09/26/2009
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jo Halliday on 09/26/09 at 03:41 AM

touches the moment, the span. good write.

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 09/26/09 at 06:09 AM

I agree, it captures a moment in time well and twists at the end to remind us, moments have a bad habit of changing

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