| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/29/09 at 05:45 PM ...man o man, quite a collection of words here, all aiming at the Self and our recognition of same said...you speak of 'seasoned, etc. and even common folk can't see your soul...that is kick butt...a great pome[sic], heavy with a wonderfully fuzzy edge... |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/29/09 at 06:13 PM WOW. I LOVE this, and loving it surprised me. But what a cool surprise!!! |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 07/30/09 at 07:51 PM I find myself in a time machine. Lovely, Michael. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/30/09 at 08:50 PM I really enjoyed this poem :) |
| Posted by James Zealy on 07/30/09 at 10:00 PM Analytical types are just not that tranparent are we? Very nice write |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/02/09 at 01:15 PM ... wonderful, well done... and welcome to Pathetic! |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 08/10/09 at 07:40 PM The science of cause and affect, a fusion of underlapping worlds :>) Effective, thus causing this favourable comment. |
| Posted by Scott Utley on 01/15/10 at 01:36 AM I wish I knew somebody like you ... |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 01/23/10 at 04:33 AM This takes my breath away... ~N |
