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LINGUA (Slither)

by Terry Olynik

Your tongue,
Pepperminty,
Young,
Insolent,
Has taught me
Humility.

An
Oral
Viper
Worthy
Of
A Snickers.*






*family-sized

06/04/2009

Posted on 06/05/2009
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kris Mara on 06/05/09 at 01:19 PM

great wit in this...I love how the playfulness comes in at the end...ends up reminding me personally of some with the particular talent you describe...and balances out the strong statement in the first stanza (I hope this came out right...what I'm trying to say, rather poorly here, is that I enjoyed your words...)

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