| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/17/09 at 04:30 PM A very uplifting piece! I wish I were as optimistic as you. Enjoyable poem with very vivid images- reat write as always! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/17/09 at 06:25 PM I'd say that's pretty reasonable. Good piece from the archives, man. |
| Posted by Tony Young on 04/17/09 at 08:58 PM Is this possible Chris, it sounds great... |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 04/20/09 at 01:52 AM You've still got some good ones in the vaults. This brought me a smile - what a great way to get around.... d:-) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/20/09 at 05:25 PM Powerful imagery! Best have a chute open well before landing! Adventure for the young or young at heart (with a very good heart)!! |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 04/20/09 at 06:27 PM fun read...but I think I'll stay on the ground if you don't mind! :) |
| Posted by Gail Wolper on 03/03/14 at 03:48 AM Everyone needs a great fantasy of simple success! Well done! |
