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Dreamscape
by Alisa Jsyou came to me last night
in a dream,
with your sexy, shy smile
and your sensuous self.
you asked me if I could be of some help
I answered, 'sure thing'
' I'd give it a try'
walking backwards through time
we revisited those moments,
those gut wrenching moments
left along with some side notes
gestating,
looking for clues and missing parts of solutions
to bring back to your present
and release,
tons of pent up anxiety,
raging anguish and heart stopping grief
after we were done
I couldn't help but notice
the one thing so amazing
was your smile,
full of love and great laughter
such comfort returning,
we soared for what seemed like miles ...
04/11/2009 Posted on 04/12/2009
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/12/09 at 05:47 PM I like this very much Alisa. Well balanced between dark and light. Warm positive closure also. Good way to wake up. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/13/09 at 04:14 PM I have had this exact feeling alisa, you described it perfectly here. Nicely done! |
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