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Troubadors by Ken HarnischTroubadors wander down the road
I watch them come
With the expectation they will
Perform better than last year’s gypsies
Who all played violins so sweetly
But in the morning
Ate our bread and robbed us blind
Crimes did not turn me off to hope
I can still appreciate the effort
Of the players, and support those
Who know both Shakespeare and
O’Neil. I read Ibsen in college
And imagined myself in love with Hedda
Gabler. But the actress who played
Her was a thespian, and men were
Not among her company.
I read now in the bathroom
There are too many diversions
In the other rooms, including
Cats and dogs and baseball
Games on TV. I have become
Quite the tactician, and know when to
Bunt and when to hit
The three-run homer. But it all takes me
Away from her, and I have lost
Something in the exchange.
Love, I’ve decided, is another
Troubador. She comes unexpected
And plays a tune. And if you know
The words you may sing along
For a time, and even do the
Karaoke thing aboard ship
With somebody banging
On his cups in percussive
Accompaniment.
The drumming will get to you
And when she leaves, as
She inevitably will, you
Will hear the drums beating
In your head and know
Them to be ghosts
Too many times
It will drive you crazy,
And make you long
For the return of the gypsies
04/08/2009 Posted on 04/08/2009 Copyright © 2025 Ken Harnisch
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/08/09 at 12:16 PM I love that second-to-last stanza. You really nail down the voice in it, and I love the form and flow of the piece as well. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/08/09 at 01:45 PM I agree with Gabe- love the piece...and everything is perfect! |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/10/09 at 12:46 PM Really well-written Ken. Love as a troubadour, I definitely can see that :) |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/10/09 at 11:38 PM My heart reads this as certain as my mind. The sadness comes, and I laugh-cried at
"Who all played violins so sweetly
But in the morning
Ate our bread and robbed us blind"
(one of my favorite parts in this)
and when arriving at the end, immediately my heart/eyes traveled to the beginning. For this is, without pause |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/10/09 at 11:39 PM my new favorite poem.
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| Posted by Kate Demeree on 04/17/09 at 01:59 AM A four star poem... as always, and as always... Creates more emotions than there are words for. Life is a road, well travled... Poetman and this poem strikes a deep cord |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 04/17/09 at 06:14 PM Love be she troubador or wild gypsy thief has a way of keeping our hearts drumming to the poetic beat, your poem, excellent in metaphor, story and rythm. smh |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 06/12/09 at 11:15 AM Great write Ken. Congrats on POTD!!! |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 06/12/09 at 10:43 PM And this beautiful poem is troubador unto itself, Ken. Your words compose a dance for the eyes and rob the reader blind. Happy*POTD! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/15/09 at 12:40 PM Excellent story telling all round Ken. I especially like the analogy of love in the last two stanzas. |
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