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On a Bad Day

by Kerowyn Rose

This body is inside-out eyes,

gibbous proportions,

ubiquitous exaggeration,

Jabba jowls,

cystic breasts,

pasty, ashy, dune-like skin.



It has obscured pulchritude

buried in flesh and pain

- electric pain.

A sluggard breathing,

prodigious clammy blob,

betrayer, silent enemy, exhausted,



reaching for the arms of death

without a thought for what I want.

02/22/2009

Posted on 02/23/2009
Copyright © 2025 Kerowyn Rose

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/23/09 at 04:02 AM

Exceptional images here, where the mind appears to have been overridden. I hope tomorrow is a good day.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/23/09 at 06:23 PM

Startling imagery! The body may ignore the mind in illness and pain! In fact for most I think that eventually happens. Thought provoking.

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