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Total Bliss (Haiku 5-7-5)
by Alisa Jshappiness with you
laying under swaying palms
my ocean or yours
01/04/2009 Posted on 01/04/2009
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/04/09 at 07:57 PM Adorable! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 01/04/09 at 11:49 PM A bit of a long distance romance? Beautifully composed. |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/05/09 at 12:41 AM and bliss it is! I adore this, Alisa. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/06/09 at 03:46 AM As a lover of the "ku", I salute you. This is ever so wonderful and I ache for another day on the islands! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/06/09 at 06:27 PM Wonderful motion in this, lovely! |
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