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by Corey Lockaby

they won't stop
won't stop
till they got you on your knees

that's just the wood panelling talking
i can distract myself from everything but this
the feeling that i'm going down slow

even jesus wanted to be let down easy

owls perched on the branches
i want to vomit
i want to sleep

i just wanna make you love me

but you'd never respond
it's like talking to
(yeah, it is)
a machine

ceiling, floor, parishes soon enough

i can know my way around a bottle
like a label

or i can know my way around a woman
like a man

but it seems i've done neither

this city doesn't like you

i could easily drop my eyes
down to the comforting flat of the ground

but no, i choose to stare at your
dissonant curves
innate depth of movement

won't stop
won't stop

12/26/2008

Posted on 12/26/2008
Copyright © 2025 Corey Lockaby

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 12/26/08 at 03:43 PM

This is very good.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/26/08 at 05:43 PM

This reads like a death rattle, a last collection of thoughts leaving the mind. Really outstanding stuff, man.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 07/31/09 at 05:40 PM

Brilliant writing. You are very unique. These lines will suspend my mind all day:

i can know my way around a bottle
like a label

or i can know my way around a woman
like a man


Posted by Kris Mara on 07/31/09 at 09:22 PM

there's such raw honesty in this...something inside me knows the space these words come from and you're able to draw them out and onto the page so well...I love the stark poetics in your voice...and the pace...it's feverish (I hope I'm making sense)...

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