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You
by Alisa Jsit always comes back to you
every time
no matter how far I wander
no matter how many I ram rod
roll over
obliterate
you are the one that could have been
forever,
I am the fool for waiting and delaying
constantly,
how could I blame you for my insecurities
I am the one who lagged behind,
stuck in my doubts
raging aloud,
I have only myself to
condemn
and I do ...
11/20/2008 Posted on 11/21/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/21/08 at 02:51 PM Self condemnation is the worst kind. Sometimes I think it less what we do than circumstance. A nod when it should have been a smile or the eyes blink when they should have been closed. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 11/21/08 at 03:20 PM the first stanza is a powerhouse alisa and the second is just so heart-wrneching. very good. |
| Posted by Steve Baba on 11/26/08 at 03:01 AM I could really feel the emotion in this poem. Well done! |
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