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The Breakup
by David Garner
you, the splinter
on the heel of my hand,
so awkward to extract
10/20/2008
Posted on 10/20/2008
Copyright © 2025 David Garner
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/20/08 at 10:42 PM ...a tight, lingering loss, still there, and awkward--great word, like Rumi, you say a lot w/ so few words... |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/21/08 at 12:40 AM That splinter - we've all had one - makes this pain very real. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/22/08 at 06:55 AM Why did this make me smile all the way through? I know it hurts, but still, it's just the way you put it! |
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