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Last Night
by David GarnerLast night you
came to
my house
from ten o'clock to three
and thirty seconds
from the time
you left
you were on the phone to me
Last night you
came to
my house
from ten o'clock to three
not even half
way down
the block
you were on the phone to me
10/06/2008 Posted on 10/07/2008
Copyright © 2025 David Garner
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Greg Williams on 10/08/08 at 12:29 AM Good poem, simple yet effective it sort of reads like a song. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/08/08 at 07:16 AM I can't tell the tone here - if the writer is conveying that she needed to stay, or that the call was annoying, or that she was desperate...I guess that might be the point? |
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