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by Alisa Js



at what point does love turn into loathing
how far do you extend the components
sit on the o, suffocate the rest
across miles unseen or damage up close
especially within arm's reach
bashing,
the sneering and smearing
of anything that creeps anywhere near to,
common sense
logical
practical
complete revile of respectable,
when did this meaning meander off
and link up with the cousin of vilify,
hook up with disparage and abuse
trample across bleeding red
hold those tears, they're worthless now …

08/27/2008

Posted on 08/27/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/28/08 at 11:38 AM

... exceptionally well done.....

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/28/08 at 01:52 PM

...ooooh, another side of the epee, eh?, such is love, we each give so much then when someone doesn't take it...we say 'our heart has turned to stone', eh?...alisaJs, i love this tho it's seems harsh, no no no, just real, we all have a 5yr old inside us and sometimes he or she wants out to cry or play...good one, gal

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