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Tranquility Lies

by Alisa Js

have you found yourself
as I have,
slipping and swaying
at the turn of,
the dime in your head
cakes on the spindle
while the syrup pours smooth,
we'll walk in the sea of ever lending returns
as I pull you much closer
and wait
for the silken dream
that breathes your name

your words, they smile
but are empty inside ...

we must stop all this fuss
this misaligned suck-up,
cheery frills and sloppy excuses
for anything that squeaks like a friendship,
they don't know you like I do
they'd die for a closer view
and yet, I stay
quiet I remain,
in frantic repose
as I wait for the obvious to show
and you?

07/24/2008

Posted on 07/25/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/25/08 at 02:28 PM

As always, you bring the kick-ass.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/25/08 at 05:26 PM

Catchy capture of relationship Alisa. I especially like these line: cheery frills and sloppy excuses for anything that squeaks like a friendship. And how you leave him hanging with the closing line.

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