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You...Still

by Genevieve Sturrock

as a wordsmith, i should
be able to describe in
exquisite detail

the thoughts of you that
occupy me throughout
the day and night

but i cannot find the words
to describe the beauty of you
as you shine in my mind

or to tell of the wonders
i have found as you discovered
the wonders of me

pornographic, photographic
emotional and psychological
my mind reels with it all

but when all is said and done
and i sit with pen in hand
all i can think to say is

as a woman,
i love you
still

06/17/2008

Author's Note: a re-post

Posted on 06/18/2008
Copyright © 2025 Genevieve Sturrock

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 06/18/08 at 02:28 AM

...beautiful, beautiful, beautiful... thanks for re-posting... ~N

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 06/18/08 at 04:19 AM

Beautiful write. loved it. adds to favorites.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/18/08 at 03:22 PM

And yet you definitely get your point across! Beautiful!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/01/09 at 05:58 PM

Sorry I missed this one- it's really beautiful- loved the entire piece!

Posted by Christel Crews on 07/25/09 at 03:24 AM

what magic in those last lines!

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