| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/17/08 at 02:13 PM Catchy word choices and construction lead to a pleasant if not serious read Alisa. A little pepper to go with the salt I'd say. Have a great summer! |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 06/22/08 at 06:20 PM like a game of hide and seek your words dance, Alisa. |
| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 06/23/08 at 02:48 AM Fantastic writing and why are we so afraid to say that one good word?
:-) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/23/08 at 03:10 PM Fascinating comment on the intricacies of a relationship and the meanings we construct based on a look or an image in a dream or fantasy. I like the interplay of mind, heart, and human interaction. |
| Posted by Steve Baba on 08/30/10 at 06:16 AM I really like this poem. Great write Alisa. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/03/10 at 01:28 AM ...a wonder then and NOW...alisaJs don't ever change. |
