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For Me
by Alisa Jsand with a word you bring me back again
hearts overflowing onto the essence of our love,
we're perfect here and will always be
the epitome of,
everyone I've always needed
everything I've seen
across the span of time and ages
you will always be
the only one I could ever adore,
the only one
for me,
forevermore ...
05/10/2008 Posted on 05/11/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/11/08 at 03:09 AM Gorgeous. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/11/08 at 03:50 AM ...alisajs, eXactly what gabe says and too, the line breaks are gorgeous in their own right, gabe is the king at line breaks and this is top notch in message[and the transmission of]and in the line breaks which a reader needs and us-reader-all-the-timers, really love...kudos...charlie |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 05/11/08 at 10:50 AM I love the purity of this ... the way it feels in heart and speak. Lovely ... m.a |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 05/11/08 at 04:55 PM I am with Charlie's comments... well written and excellent form!!! |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 05/12/08 at 11:18 PM Very elegant and clean. I love this. Nice write :) |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/15/08 at 10:01 PM "and with a word you bring me back again" a most perfect line and truly the essence of all it takes to reach someone who is truly in love. Lovely. smh.
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