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unravel
by Mary Frances Spencerloosen the binding
expectations knotted
frustration cinches
fear closes in
anger burns gut
slowly uncoil
breathe in undulation
shed your skin
snake
open the portals
and shine
04/27/2008 Author's Note: I think we all need to let go of tightness and tensions so we can truly radiate our peace! MFS
Posted on 04/28/2008
Copyright © 2025 Mary Frances Spencer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/28/08 at 02:19 PM ...mFs...mlady, i been thinking along the same lines but i love the ta da, ta da to this one and the subject(s) captured in one or one-two word combos are wonderfully staggering...each of those descriptor do exactly what you say they do...good alliterative feel to it...charlie |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/28/08 at 02:20 PM ...mFs...mlady, i been thinking along the same lines but i love the ta da, ta da to this one and the subject(s) captured in one or one-two word combos are wonderfully staggering...each of those descriptor do exactly what you say they do...good alliterative feel to it...charlie |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 04/28/08 at 03:21 PM It took many years past growing up to learn to take that deep breath. Nicely done! |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 04/30/08 at 03:10 AM True, so true.. my fellow poetess friend. Sending you miles of smiles across land and sea... ;-).....;-)......;-)..... alisa ;-) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/01/08 at 06:07 AM I think thee shine already. Nice writing...CharMin |
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