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Of gardens of dreams

by Izzy Koranda

dancing soft naked
woolly cotton brains
I want a future
I want my past
I'm willing to fight
from now on down the final farewell
always going never coming
never cumming always showing
come with me again

04/08/2008

Posted on 04/08/2008
Copyright © 2025 Izzy Koranda

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Erin Eymard on 04/08/08 at 03:56 PM

Izzy, I love the final couple of lines. I love the awkward determination and naked pleas. Very well done. - Erin

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