| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/07/08 at 04:38 AM Beautifully written, man. Very nice. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 04/07/08 at 06:33 PM Your enthusiasm is quite contagious, you sweet man you. This is a wonderful work. forearm hair like devoted warriors, now that is electric indeed. I really love this. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/07/08 at 07:19 PM Beautifully descriptive, with subtle sensual undercurrents vibrating just beneath the surface of these words. This is going on my favorites. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/07/08 at 08:47 PM I like the way you separated the lines. I love line 8, and the mix of heat and cold in this. The electricity is palpable! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/17/08 at 07:14 AM It's a rare and gorgeous experience, what you've described here. The tear gets me. Everytime. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/18/10 at 03:51 PM Congrats on POTD Scott!!! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/18/10 at 04:43 PM A very special piece. The last 2 lines took my breath away- thank you. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/18/10 at 04:53 PM Congratulations on POTD! I was glad to see it again. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/18/10 at 07:09 PM A fine, fine POTD! Congrats! |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 05/18/10 at 10:44 PM What a beautiful and uplifting piece. Wonderful choice for POTD, also. Nicely done, Scott. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 05/21/10 at 10:42 PM Congratulations on a well desesrved poem of the day, Scott. |
