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Once

by David Garner






Once
I wanted
to be
the greatest.



03/04/2008

Posted on 03/04/2008
Copyright © 2025 David Garner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 03/04/08 at 08:51 PM

I think if you went further it may give too many specifics. Being this quick and short leaves us to fill in your blanks as well as our own. Very introspective for writer and reader alike. ~JPP

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 03/05/08 at 04:33 PM

Love the perspective of this... and it has the feel of the beginning od a story and yet... it IS the story!

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