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Remember? by Alisa Jswon't you follow me backwards in time
to the day we first found our hello's
pristine, there in the halo
untarnished, reflecting the sun
and all it's splendor
radiant
remember with me the quiver
heart stopping shimmer, I do
spasms of smiles from the inside out
a flurry of fervor about
the time of the utterance
the time of that first breath
floating on billows of chance
and we flew
oh! where did that vibrancy go?
as I stand here watching my shadow
listening to rumors,
craving your comfort
wary of whispers that scream ...
02/07/2008 Posted on 02/07/2008 Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/08/08 at 04:03 AM A hell of an interesting memory. Brilliantly captured. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/12/08 at 03:17 PM I do indeed remember. Fortunately for me anyway the good memories outweigh the bad. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/12/08 at 03:19 PM PS: I especially like those two opening lines. |
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