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by Alisa Js

There was a space between here and there
I tried my best to fit inside
Nothing happened, it never does
I swam around my indecision
Swallowed me in
And wondered how and when
I began to lose myself
With each passing sundown
Melting away my reflection
As I continued this path
Have I forgotten the way
Took a wrong turn, a misstep, a side show
Languishing in broad emotions
Not meant to last
Not meant to be the all in all
Yet, somehow I find myself surrounded by this invisible barrier
Bounded by what appears to be nonsense
Of my own making
Voices and expectations speak out from the abyss
I know itÂ’s a lie
But I find myself hopelessly sinking
And like a puppet follow the string ...

01/25/2008

Posted on 01/26/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/26/08 at 04:26 PM

And search we must. We will look until there is no time left. Well done.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/28/08 at 08:30 PM

wonderful word choice and flow....

Posted by Steve Baba on 12/18/08 at 11:16 PM

Great poem Alisa! I enjoyed this one a lot...

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/01/09 at 04:52 PM

...alisaJs...too much! a lovely pome, digestable and full of protein. great work.

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