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Movie by David GarnerCredits roll
all the important people of my life right now
billed in alphabetical order
except you
you get the final
and
and you
as
The Temptress
then
edited by
then
produced by
then
written and directed by
then the music swells
opening montage
youth and birth
in that order
mom's red hair
dad's deep voice
sister's lab coat
brother's photo
and then you
you make a brief entrance
but we don't see you again
for at least forty minutes
I wrote it that way
it writes itself
she must come back into the picture
sometimes it's good to have to wait for the temptress to resurface
01/11/2008 Posted on 01/11/2008 Copyright © 2025 David Garner
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/11/08 at 09:08 PM Great dramatic presentation! Love the vivid movie scenario. This is interesting sweet, and funny too, at least in the description... maybe in real life movie.. we'd just be waiting breathlessly for the resurface scene. |
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