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Under the Guaze of Sweet Sudden Shocks and Unveilings

by David Garner





I,


Virgin


to


True


Love,


Until


Recently,


Thought


True


Love


Was


Something


Only


Bargained


with


the


Devil


by


the


Lonely


and


the


Needy.


But


God


in


a


Heart


in


a


Wheel


in


a


Body


from


a


Heavenly


Wagon


Came


Rolling


My


Way


with


Such


Awesome


Perfection,


Precision


and


Grace,


Revealing


to


Me


Under


the


Gauze


of


Sweet


Sudden


Shocks


and


Unveilings


That


That


Kind


of


Thinking


and


That


Kind


of


Feeling


Needs


Flicking


Away


and


Good


Riddance.


Those


Kinds


of


Compacts


and


those


Kinds


of


Compounds


Go


Out


of


the


Window


along


With


the


Dust


Crumbs


and


Crumbles


and


the


infinite


particles


seen


only


by


eyes


through


bright


sunlight


and


daylight.


And


This


is


the


day


to


Open


Three


Eyes


and


Proclaim


Our


Good


Love


is


Not


Good


Love,


But


Our


Love


and


True


Love


and


That


is


the


Reason


why


I


Do


My


Laundry


at


Your


Place.

01/07/2008

Posted on 01/07/2008
Copyright © 2025 David Garner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/08/08 at 05:01 PM

Just love the surprises under the "gauze" of this... the "three eyes" (highlighting the extaordinary) for one, and the "laundry" (bringing things down to the basics of everyday life and how it sings beyond itself) is the other. A breathless explosion of insight and wonder. Zestful--one can't help but hear this spoken aloud.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 01/09/08 at 10:35 PM

you love to do laundry at her place. hehehe. great read.

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