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by Alisa Js

lay me across that field of lights
gently, as I am weak
memories stir and begin to fade
caught away in a serenade trapped by darkness
all desire recedes,
I am left with silence, deafening
nothing,
no in between

learn to be
for the first time in a long time

lose the resistance
of inconvenient turns and twists
how they mar the soul,
follow along this stream
of new consciousness
aware
behold, the key ...

01/05/2008

Posted on 01/06/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/06/08 at 12:40 AM

This is so quiet, serene, even in the midst of what sounds like a painful journey. Sometimes when we are at our weakest, peace creeps in and soothes with its balm of wisdom. You are an amazingly brilliant soul. You will shine again.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/06/08 at 01:41 AM

an excellent read.....

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 01/06/08 at 02:54 AM

I love "learn to be"....sometimes so hard to do! Adding to my favs! MFS

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