| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/21/07 at 10:07 PM wow... there is something breathtaking about this, partly because of the space--as if the action would happen it it! I hold my breath looking. It's like a stage. But the wires are not yet cut-- still I can just feel it happening, that hug. born of obsessive(and personally directed) desire. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/25/07 at 08:37 PM At first I thought the page was blank, then I saw the words. This poem has a kick that adding any more words would nullify.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Cristy M. on 12/05/07 at 02:29 AM i like it this much: o[imjcqc[xxox,om. yes, i really do. that makes two of yours on my faves. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/03/08 at 01:39 PM so much said with so few strokes. I think, wires or no wires, beyond our own resolve, there is something to be said about the puppets in our lives permitted the chance to embrace us of their own volition. love received without urging, oh what a feeling! |