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Love/Life by David Garnertell me a tonic
and I'll pour you some lies.
you've got a beautiful sunset;
just look at those eyes.
see how the smoke fills my glass
and the gin fills my room?
yes, my child died in the sea
as I walked 'long her womb.
I like my T-bones black now
and my coffee medium rare.
pull up a tree
and we'll go chop down a chair.
let's go shop at the church
and we'll pray at the mall.
I'll climb you a rose
and I'll pick you a wall
to keep it pressed in your thoughts
and fresh in a book
like the dinners you share
or the stories you cook
or the cake that you brush
or the hair that you burn
the butter you read
or my mind that you churn--
the pillow you brew...
or the hot tea that you fluff...
when the tickling rings
and the phone is enough;
and we force our goodbye's
as we speak with our hands.
you know you're someone I'll never remember,
but I will understand.
and your image grows darker
as the night I find smaller.
and I'm forced to explain about the lipstick on the odometer
and the mileage on my collar.
and I have a fight with my reason
(as I justify my wife)
for having no spice in our love
because we quit making life.
11/20/2007 Author's Note: an oldie I found.
Posted on 11/20/2007 Copyright © 2025 David Garner
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/20/07 at 09:47 PM I wanna keep this one, it's mine now, I put it in my favorites. I love the surreality, the upside down backwards image by image behind well, this is so zestful, both (seemingly)innocent and sarcastic, a remedy and a joy to read over and over. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/21/07 at 03:54 AM But a goodie, to use an awful, awful cliche (but it's still true)/. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/25/07 at 08:35 PM The switched contradictions and light rhyme pulled me through your words to the end. Glad you found this oldie and reposted it. Isn't sometimes true of life that the things we think are so ordinary, change with persective if we just switch our seats?
~Chelle~ |
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