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The Gifting
by Alisa JsHe gazed at her and smiled
From deep within his soul,
A treasure presented...
She turned and gave him her heart
And walked into
All their memories of tomorrow Â…
11/08/2007 Posted on 11/08/2007
Copyright © 2025 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/08/07 at 08:42 PM ...alisssssaJ...a scrumptous dish to chomp on...gal, this hit the mark of whatever you were aiming at nahaha, a wonderful expose o' life in the giving-yo'-heart to someone deserving annnd the tomorrow reference is CAPITAL, CAPITAL...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/09/07 at 03:22 PM Quite the impact. The first stanza sets up the uniqueness of ther second...walking into the future as if it's already the past. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/13/07 at 03:17 PM A most satisfying gift exchange. Thank you. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 11/14/07 at 10:03 PM what a lovely little piece...a gift of a poem (sorry for the cheezy reference, but it really is)...the close is so open it breathes ("...walked into/ All their memories of tomorrow …")...a pleasure, thanks, all the best, *jewels* |
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