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Temptation

by David Garner

I've really never seen one
up close and personal

I've had the chance
to make it dance

but have opted not to go there

sometimes I fantasize
about it

then I think I highly
doubt it

11/08/2007

Posted on 11/08/2007
Copyright © 2025 David Garner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/08/07 at 03:26 PM

Enjoyable read, david. You nailed temptation with this one.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/25/07 at 10:23 PM

I love the unspoke in this, the unmentioned detail, "temptation" the allure of something and that is the moment captured here. The yes, or no here fantasy still allures the doubt...

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