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Salty Spot Idea

Quikie but quality
Diminished by every raincoat left on my bathroom floor

10/17/2007

Posted on 10/18/2007
Copyright © 2025 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/18/07 at 03:18 AM

I like the image of the last line.

Posted by Mark Maxey on 11/08/07 at 03:28 AM

short words for such a vivid imagery...good job!

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