| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/13/07 at 03:41 AM I like the language in this, obviously. Especially the "smothered" line. |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 10/15/07 at 04:35 AM i like the proportion that your words find rich detail seeing past the monotonous mundane.
beautiful |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/15/07 at 05:14 AM You give October a whole new meaning... I can't wait for the next two weeks the the liquid delights I will find there... trailing your poem behind me on a newly braided autumn thread. Lovely poem, Kristina. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/19/12 at 03:01 PM Good one Kristina. Brought a smile to my face, and great for the season of witches. Sorry I missed it back in October 2007. |