| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/06/07 at 04:44 AM I'd like to see more on this thought. Not that this felt incomplete or anything. It was brutal, good stuff. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/06/07 at 08:47 AM signed on just to comment this.....I am loving every second of it! Great, read it 3 times...going to read again! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/06/07 at 07:05 PM Rogue poet's assessment of conversation I think! But a lovable rogue nontheless. Glad to see you back baiting us all! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/06/07 at 07:46 PM A powerful statement for one way of looking at it Max. I like how this poem takes no prisoners. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/07/07 at 02:59 PM A dripping pen, to be sure.... I wait for more. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/07/07 at 04:20 PM Indeed! You nailed it, Max. Excellent poem and commentary. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/08/07 at 02:42 AM
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b r i l l i a n t
p o e m
h a t h
h e r e
o c c u r e t h !
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| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/14/07 at 06:41 PM The smile of which nightmares are made - are platitudes really as effective as floss? :) |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 01/21/08 at 01:31 AM a brilliant tongue lashing! mrrwarrow! PK |
