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A blossom closing (haiku)
by Sigurdur HaraldssonA blossom closing
drinking from the autumn sun
for the last time 08/22/2007 Posted on 08/22/2007
Copyright © 2026 Sigurdur Haraldsson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/22/07 at 05:20 PM The moment of the blossom/autumnal closing is a subtle and original seasonal focus. The picture of flower drinking--also unusual/as flowers often are drunk from by bee or bird--I like the flower drunk from the sun... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/23/07 at 04:52 PM Quite effective! Hat's off to ya. :o) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/25/07 at 12:24 AM wonderful.. simply perfect & peaceful |
| Posted by Christopher J Davidson on 09/25/07 at 07:52 AM This is exactly what I Haiku should be. Simple, elegant, heartfelt, and with meaning and substance. |
| Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/02/07 at 09:27 PM Very Nice, very descriptive. |
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