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by Andrew S Adams

i am but water
waiting silently beneath
these troubled bridges.

08/04/2007

Posted on 08/04/2007
Copyright © 2026 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 08/04/07 at 09:13 AM

An appropriate Ku for Minneapolis. Well done.

Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 08/08/07 at 12:08 AM

Unsettling and haunting, Andrew - a first-rate haiku! d:-)

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/14/10 at 03:56 PM

oh. to be water, how wonderful it would be... great haiku!

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