| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/24/07 at 04:42 AM I like that last stanza a lot, but what I really like is the whole vibe of the speaker knowing they don't have to say any more than what's been laid out so far. It's a nice touch, and you pull it off really well. |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/24/07 at 07:08 AM This is a very powerful poem -I stood back, took a deep breath with this. I love your strength. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 02/24/07 at 02:47 PM Nothing more nurturing or fiercer in defense than a mother's love. Very well stated. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 02/25/07 at 06:39 AM you go girl... we women have to be strong and smart...and not run like weak willed nitwits when evil approaches...;-) |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/25/07 at 01:00 PM A wonderful write.... such powerful imagery is evoked.... |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 02/27/07 at 04:12 AM well, i think you have every right to be pissed off! i'm just sorry you have to deal with this on such a regular basis.. i'm here if you need to vent! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/28/07 at 03:42 AM Raising children can be tough at times....Charlie |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/03/07 at 02:40 PM Lovely like a Lioness!!! You go, Mom! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/03/07 at 03:17 PM This resonates with your strong awareness and self control in a difficult situation. |
